Friday, June 26, 2015

Luis Polo 

Professor SunYung

Academic Writing

26 June 2015

The event that changed my life

Doing the Master Program in Public Health is the event that changed my life a lot. I completed my master degree in Public health at the National University of Colombia in 2006. Before that, I was working hard under pressure and I had many activities, and the bad payment, because, I did not have a specialization. After work six years as a professional and three years doing the Master, I could change my life and my family too. All in all, the quality of life and welfare in my home improved remarkably, after this moment.

1 comment:

  1. Luis, we talked about your paragraph in class. This is a good paragraph! Please remember that the topic sentence and the concluding sentence should be very clear and strong. Excellent job!